Senior Project Paper Review

I wrote my paper on the history of the 88 constellations in the sky and my thesis was that Greek mythology allows casual astronomers to appreciate the night sky significantly more. My paper was plenty long and had many facts, and the formatting was solid; I didn't get my paper back. I think the paper was a good summary of all the stories of Greek mythology. Had it been a college paper, it wouldn't have passed though. There wasn't nearly enough analysis and the structure was very boring and repetitive. If I was to do it in a more serious setting I would supplement the facts with analysis and transitions to make the paper easier to read.